Saturday, October 20, 2007

Fabric of feathers

Hi all. Yes still alive, I'm afraid...

Just completed an illustration project in school. Here are some of the pictures I'm most happy with.

Media used were acrylic and Copic Brush-S pen. Compiled and typed on PS.

Love it? Hate it? Would love to hear it. Yoroshiku!


sokkuan said...

I like the way u do your layout. like the 3rd layout most where the floral pattern is mixed with stripes... interesting colour combination also. ummm... maybe improve more on the figure drawing. ('u')

mindflyer 小飞人 said...

Hi Billy,

1. I like the pattern most though the execution of the floral elements can be tighter.

2. The figures can be better - like what Sokkuan said- practice more.

3. Learn how to stylise the figures more too. They can save your day.

4. You set the whole story in CAPS?? I think this makes the page hard to read.

zeropointfive said...

i think the style of the humans can be slightly more stylized to suit the feel? (like sketchier or more japanese style illustrations but not to far from the general style)

The compositions for the latter two for quite strong. It's quite interesting and different for a story :)

Billy said...

Hi guys,

Thanks for the advice! Will continue working on my figures.

Also to mindflyer, sorry for not going to the dinner. Too much work lately.

Thanks again!

drewscape said...

nicely done. i like the last panel best too.