This is an illustration I did for a poem that a friend wrote. Its kind of abstract and a little experimental for me. Basically it involves a dream that a girl had.
Ya i agree on the hairline, it's too sharp and crisp against the background.
Otherwise, nice textures! OMG unfortunately ur strength is going to play against you. the girl and the textures look so real that most people are going to think it's a photo collage and not a rendered illustration!
since it's for a poem, i think some stylized typography into the illustration might be nice. tricky to do though. Think Dave Mckean :)
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not bad. Nice textures. But the photo doesn't seem integrated with the background nicely enough. Can do more with this.
yeah I get what you mean.. esp where the hairline is. but its not a photo actually..
Ya i agree on the hairline, it's too sharp and crisp against the background.
Otherwise, nice textures! OMG unfortunately ur strength is going to play against you. the girl and the textures look so real that most people are going to think it's a photo collage and not a rendered illustration!
since it's for a poem, i think some stylized typography into the illustration might be nice. tricky to do though. Think Dave Mckean :)
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