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Only Seiji can get away with this kind content!Nice commentary eventhough I was squinting like mad trying to read the tiny text. Funny story !:D
good melting sequence. I like the drawings. But I thought the ending was unnecessary humor-wise. Or it could have ended with something different but surprising.and yes the handwriting needs more clarity.
i actually thought the last panel was the "punch" in terms of reporting a missing person which then relates to how the person melts away.guess it's my sense of humour
Yah - now tht Andrew mention it and looking at it again- I agree with him- the last panel is stating the obvious.Ending even withOUT the last 3 frames packs more punch.
i think the punch was having his body parts rearranged while melting. it's surprising and funny.
nope. I disagree with you guys and still stand that the last panel is important and is the punch,and it's not stating the obvious, cos without the newscaster mentioning a man missing, the whole context of it will be just a man melting off and there is no "story" to it. and oh, the body parts did not rearrange itself.. it's just the irregular melting process caused the private parts at one point to be on the head. more than anything else.
but you are wrong. hahaha
prove it in an empirical way;)
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